Teenagers are people who have matured from a child to a older boy/girl. They’re people who are one stage away from being an adult. People are acting like they weren’t teenagers before. They should know how we feel and there is always a reason for our reactions. Teenagers are just normal humans trying to understand how life works and looking for options in life. Being a teenager isnt easy because In their early years in life is where you chose your options to what you would want to do in the future. For example i want to chose business history p.e gcse and computer science, they are really hard subjects and each one of them can give me a really successful career.
Most teenagers are really sporty and are always at football pitches like me. I mostly go swimming and football, the adults just watch us play and dont really say anything, sometimes they even invite us to play with them. Some teenagers get rude to adults when the adutls are rude to them. Teenagers some times know what they want and how they want it. If money goes missing or someone got robbed, they will always look at the teenagers.
Teenagers have alot to go through, at that time of their life, it choses wich way in life they want to go, what road they want to take, either the really bad road or the succesful road.
Most of the teenagers want to get money and spend it on everything they want, so the way they get money is by stealing because either their family can’t afford everything they want or his/her parents are strict with them and they dont get everything. Some teenagers can be very patient but only some of them because most of them are desperate and want what they want now.
Being a teenager can some times be stressful, you have to concentrate on your studies and keep up with annoying friends that always call you text you and always want to know about your life. I’ve experiance alot as a teenager, like the people i talk to and get close too. As a teenager you don’t want to get close to bad people because they can turn on you and then its game over for you. So its better to have friends who aren’t dangerous and who wouldnt turn their backs on you for nothing.
At this stage of age everyone wants to get a girlfriend, so have and some havent. If your lucky enough you would get a really good girlfriend and if you aint the lucky enough in future you will probarly get one. Alot of friends that are girls will mostly likely get close to you and will get to know you better, some will probarly like you and some will probarly just want to stay as really good friends.
Teenagers arent really bad peole, some teenagers are really bad and most of them really want to be successful in life and dont want to fail and get far in life. Teenagers at this age want money and want to buy alot of clothes, i like my clothes and my money aswell, but when theres no money, theres no money, but i dont really mind, so i wait untill there is money so i can get what i want, some people do illegal things to get money because they cant wait and they need money now. People like that dont really care about their future because whilst they are doing illegal things, they could be studying and get more money in the future than they are getting now, but its their problem not mine.
Everyday you see teenagers doing sports, people get surprised because some teenagers like to run at the park and train, when i went running once a lady that was running aswell was just looking at me and just gave me a dirty look as if i didnt know what i was doing, so i picked up the pace and started running really fast non stop untill i got to the end of my destination to prove to the lady that not only adults run, but teenagers run aswell. When teenagers go swimming everyone thinks their going to cause trouble but in reality their there to train, most teenagers go swimming to train or have a good time with friends. Once i went swimming and a man challenged me to a race because he thought i couldnt sgnwim, but i proved him wrong beat him by a mile.
Not all teenagers are bad, some people you look down on can be more successful than you in future.
April 12, 2015 at 11:03 pm
Hello,
I really like that you have tried to include your own personal aspirations here – it adds a nice touch and lightens the tone well.
You’ve also expressed some interesting views about why being a teen isn’t easy, although have a look at your targets for how to develop this.
Targets
1) Write a plan – this will help develop your structure and focus
2) Remember to use paragraphs
3) In class, we have explored ideas such as stereotypes, peer pressure the reputation of teens created by the media – There’s definitely room to develop this here.
April 15, 2015 at 9:58 pm
John,
I can see that you have added to this – I have two more targets for you to carry on with.
Aim to re-draft at least one paragraph in order to achieve the Perfect Paragraph badge
http://achieve.community.edutronic.net/stage-one-writing/perfect-paragraph/
How will you meet this criteria?
Be strict with paragraph length – where would you split your paragraph above? Why?
May 6, 2015 at 9:04 pm
John
In order to achieve perfect paragraph you need to:
1. Split your work into paragraphs
2. Enhance your work with three unique words, spelled correctly
3. Try and use a semi-colon
Ms A
May 19, 2015 at 6:23 pm
Hello John,
I can see that you have added a little more today. The previous targets set by Ms Andrews (and me) still stand – aim to achieve Perfect Paragraph by following these.
You should see me tomorrow lunch time for some help with this.
Thanks,
Mr North
June 2, 2015 at 10:56 pm
John,
I can see you have split this into paragraphs – do still look at your first paragraph as this changes the idea mid-way through. Where is this? Where should it become two paragraphs?
Re-read your work aloud to help identify where you will need to correct spellings.
There’s still quite a long way to go before you reach your minimum word limit of 700 words.
June 15, 2015 at 7:01 pm
Now you’ve reached your word limit – you must proof-read and edit your work.
Start with sentence length. If you have used more than one conjunction (and, but, also, because) per sentence – add a full stop.
Then correct the spelling you know.
Then look up the spelling of words you do not know.
Keep it up!