English Essay

In both of the poems, we,re currently studying in English, are both related to power. They both have a strong relation to power, the way they both have a powerful way of describing their feelings of before and after they done what they done.both of the poems are both called ‘War Photographer’ and ‘ Remains’. These both poems start of with a person with a heart, with feelings. They both have a job which they did not think it’ll affect them in the future as bad as they thought it would.

The photographer, is a person that works taking pictures in war. seeing people die is his job , taking pictures of children crying after their parents or family members are dying on the floor covered by blood. the photographer has one of the worst jobs there could be. the power shown in the poem, is that, he/she has the power to take pictures without having a mental breakdown. they have a strong heart to watch people die without running away and panicking. with the photographer, the main persons future, wouldn’t be the same as it was before seeing people get killed before your eyes would make anyone have a mental breakdown in the future.

The power of memory is used in both poems, in the war photographer and remains memory has a a big impact on both people due to the fact that their memory’s bring back the horrid past experience they had. There’s a saying that, the more you try to forget about something the more you remember and think about it more.

In remains when the author says ‘he’s here in my head when i close my eyes’ i really find that this quote expresses the power of memory because he is thinking about the guy he killed in the beginning and towards the end when he says ‘his bloody life in my bloody hands’ which basically resembles the way he used his hands to kill the person so he’s got bloody hands for the rest of his life.

Both of the poems talk about how they both had a life and their job. They are very similar because it starts with both of the persons living their normal life until something happens that scares their life forever. for the war photographer, he is a person that goes to war just to take pictures to the press or some other people or companies. In this quote in the war photographer, it shows the way the power of memory is used, ‘a strangers features faintly start to twist before his eyes, a half-formed ghost. he remembers the cries of this mans wife, how he sought approval without words to do what someone must and how the blood stained into foreign dust’, it basically says how he remembers when the soldier died and his wife crying over him, he remembers how she was crying about his death. He said strangers features faintly start to twist before his eyes, which basically explains the way how he gets flash backs to when he remembers the wife crying.

In the war photographer, when he was doing his job, to take pictures of people in war dying and fighting for what they thought was right, had a very painful side effect just as the quote tell us that ‘ solutions slop in trays beneath his hands’ which did not tremble then though seem to now’ the side effect he had was that he didn’t tremble back them when taking the pictures but after everything as over. From my point of view, the poet is telling us that, if its a horrible job and you don’t feel how horrible it is in the moment of doing it, you’ll feel it later in the future when the job is done.

In remains, the person has a very strong power of authority to be holding weapons and killing someone as a job, i know this information because of this quote that is in the poem Remains ‘ I see every round as it rips through his life, i see broad daylight on the other side’.  In this quote it tells me that he has a gun as he says ‘ i see every round as it rips through his life’ by round meaning bullets or ammunition, as by saying i’ve got rounds of ammunitions. In the quote it starts of as well by saying’ he see’s broad day light on the other side’, meaning that the rounds he used to shoot the looter (as he says in the poem) have torn through his body to see the broad light on the other side. In the same poem theres a quote that says ‘So we’ve hit this looter a dozen and he’s there on the ground, sort of inside out’. This quote gives me more information about the person holding the gun, it tells me he is not alone as he says we’ve meaning we have, which means its more than one person involved. Straight after that, it tells me its a looter, so the people didn’t shoot someone with out a reason to, the main reason being that he’s a looter. In the same sentence it tells me that to person who got shot, that ‘he’s laying on the ground sort of inside out’  which gives me a better reason to believe that the people who shot the looter has been killed. By him saying the looter has been shot inside out, means that everything in the inside of a human, has been flipped outside, so all the guts and blood has been turns into his new exposed skin.

In the war photographer it gives me a goo explanation of what the job is really about and why he does it, ‘From the aeroplane he stares impassively at where he earns a living and they do not care’ in this quote it tells me that he has a power of observation and authority, because he is looking down on an aeroplane to where the war is taking place. As well as the way he explains how he is impassively staring outside the plane window to where he earns a living, which means that is his job and he has to do this to earn his food and earn money to feed his family if he has one. The people who contracted him do not care, as long as he job is done, they do not care, as they said it in the quote.

Both of the poems have a large variety of powers. From my point of view they both share a strong power of memory and a power of authortiy which really stands out as in one poem, a group of people are holding guns and are allowed to shoot them and in the other hes flying on a plane on top of the battlefield. Not everyone can do that so thats tells me he has an authortiy so theres a power of authortiy.

 

 

 



		

Behind The Beautiful Forevers

This essay will be based on the perspectives of Mumbai through three main protagonists which are Asha, Abdul and Sunil. In this book Katherine boo tells us about their life in annawadi, it starts of by telling us about Abdul. Abdul is a very hard worker, he has to sort out all the rubbish, he gioes around the whole of annawadi and gets rubbish and takes it home, he sorts out all the rubbish that his family takes and the rubbish he finds all around annawadi. he has to do this to survivie otherwise hsi family wouldnt survive.

Abdul is the main character is the second generation garbage picker, he picks up use full garbage for his family so they can use it to survive in the slums. he is named the breadwinner, because he is the one who goes around the whole of annawadi picking up garbage. in the book it says that he is accused of the one legs death, which is fatima. she was burnt to death. Abdul and his dad was accused of her death, even though it wasnt abdul and his father who killed fatima in such a horrible way.

Asha is the mother manju, she is the unoffical slumlord, woman slumlords in india is very rare and not common. she’s has a son called rahul as well, her son rahul is friends with mirchi, they go to the same school and he does some work at a hotel. mirchi is abduls younger brother. ashas husband is an alcoholic and does very little to help asha with her problems. asha started with nothing like the others of where she lives and now she is the slumlord, and always men are the slumlords but this time a woman is a slumlord which is very rare and surprising.

sunil is an male adolescent, who got kicked out the orphanage because he was too old for it and they said they couldn’t handle him.

 

News Paper Article – Inequality

I would say that the economic inequality has affected the humanity progress because there are rich people and poor. if two people startof in the same class same age and both arent rich or poor, one could succeed in getting rich ant the other would spend his time messing around and not succeeding in life

Riff the bard

Setting park: Burgess Park

 

Brutus & Cassius

Octavius & Anthony

octavius: I wouldn’t go into your path but this time I will

brutus: we should talk before we have our battle,our last talk together before one of us dies

Anthony:the last thing I want Is to die on my enemies sword, the clouds are about to collide and make a storm

Cassius: Brutus, this battle will include us putting our life on the line, and I am prepared to put my life on the line, are you?

Brutus: Yes Cassius I am prepared to put my life on the line, as long as your willing to do the same I will as well 

Octavious: Stop muttering under your breath and fight us

Anthony:their too scared to fight us, they need a plan to beat us

Octavious: Indeed they do, we are not holding back, are we Anthony? 

Anthony: No we’re not

Brutus: So much for our last talk

Cassuis: “Screams out loud”Let’s GO!

“They all shout and run towards each other”

 

Persuasive Writing for girls with long hair

Teenagers are people who have matured from a child to a older boy/girl. They’re people who are one stage away from being an adult. People are acting like they weren’t teenagers before. They should know how we feel and there is always a reason for our reactions. Teenagers are just normal humans trying to understand how life works and looking for options in life. Being a teenager isnt easy because In their early years in life is where you chose your options to what you would want to do in the future. For example i want to chose business history p.e gcse and computer science, they are really hard subjects and each one of them can give me a really successful career.

Most teenagers are really sporty and are always at football pitches like me. I mostly go swimming and football, the adults just watch us play and dont really say anything, sometimes they even invite us to play with them. Some teenagers get rude to adults when the adutls are rude to them. Teenagers some times know what they want and how they want it. If money goes missing or someone got robbed, they will always look at the teenagers.

Teenagers have alot to go through, at that time of their life, it choses wich way in life they want to go, what road they want to take, either the really bad road or the succesful road.

Most of the teenagers want to get money and spend it on everything they want, so the way they get money is by stealing because either their family can’t afford everything they want or his/her parents are strict with them and they dont get everything. Some teenagers can be very patient but only some of them because most of them are desperate and want what they want now.

Being a teenager can some times be stressful, you have to concentrate on your studies and keep up with annoying friends that always call you text you and always want to know about your life. I’ve experiance alot as a teenager, like the people i talk to and get close too. As a teenager you don’t want to get close to bad people because they can turn on you and then its game over for you. So its better to have friends who aren’t dangerous and who wouldnt turn their backs on you for nothing.

At this stage of age everyone wants to get a girlfriend, so have and some havent. If your lucky enough you would get a really good girlfriend and if you aint the lucky enough in future you will probarly get one. Alot of friends that are girls will mostly likely get close to you and will get to know you better, some will probarly like you and some will probarly just want to stay as really good friends.

Teenagers arent really bad peole, some teenagers are really bad and most of them really want to be successful in life and dont want to fail and get far in life. Teenagers at this age want money and want to  buy alot of clothes, i like my clothes and my money aswell, but when theres no money, theres no money, but i dont really mind, so i wait untill there is money so i can get what i want, some people do illegal things to get money because they cant wait and they need money now. People like that dont really care about their future because whilst they are doing illegal things, they could be studying and get more money in the future than they are getting now, but its their problem not mine.

Everyday you see teenagers  doing sports, people get surprised because some teenagers like to run at the park and train, when i went running once a lady that was running aswell was just looking at me and just gave me a dirty look as if i didnt know what i was doing, so i picked up the pace and started running really fast non stop untill i got to the end of my destination to prove to the lady that not only adults run, but teenagers run aswell. When teenagers go swimming everyone thinks their going to cause trouble but in reality their there to train, most teenagers go swimming to train or have a good time with friends. Once i went swimming and a man challenged me to a race because he thought i couldnt sgnwim, but i proved him wrong beat him by a mile.

Not all teenagers are bad, some people you look down on can be more successful than you in future.

Essay

How Does Shakespeare Present Fate In Julius?

Fate is something that controls your future and sets it out. It cant be avoided, you have to live with it. You can try anything but it wont change your fate because its already set out for you.

Shakespeare shows fate when Brutus said “Arming Myself With Patience To Stay The Providence Of Some High Powers That Govern Us Below”. <–In that quote Brutus is saying that he should be patience and and let the high powers that govern us guide us, Brutus is saying that the High powers have already set out my path and that i should stay patient untill i get to the path fate has chosen for me.

The way shakespeare used fate with Cassius.

The way he used fate with cassius  was when he said “The Gods to-day stand friendly, that we may” Hes trying to say that God is friendly with us and not ending our lives at this moment and letting us live one. Thats what i think amd thats how am explaing it. Cassius used fate in that quote.

Shakespeare used fate with both brutus and cassius, it was really hard to find it out but the way he expressed it was easier to find out.

 

 

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